This is my second Draft of my contents mock up. I believeit has improved to look more authentic. i have changed the masthead to the effect of 'hue' on Macromedia Fireworks. i have done this as before i thrt the title looked unfit for the page and did not stand out anywhere near enough and with the colour now it fits in with the colours on the pictures on the page.

i have also added more text so it looks more like a proffesional contents page. I have also changed the colour of the text to the effect of ' difference ' on Fireworks so the text blends into the page.

This is my First drafts of my mock up contents page. it follows on from my first front cover mock up. there is another main picture of buckethead to link the products together. the colour scheme has been kept similar to the front cover with blacks and blues to add a dark feeling to the magazine.

to improve this i believe it needs more writing to make it look more authentic and the masthead looks really boring and doesnt fit in.